What Else Can You See?

Image courtesy of Chris Dryden

Image courtesy of Chris Dryden – who is the awesome star of this shot, and also, my friend!

“To acquire knowledge, one must study;
but to acquire wisdom, one must observe.”
~ Marilyn Vos Savant

 

A wise and talented memoirist and creative writing teacher, Beth Kephart, has her students do an exercise where they go out into the world and take ten photographs.

The students know they are going to come back into the classroom and write about those photos. I bet they are already thinking about the clever things they will say as they snap off their shots.

But then she has them do something unexpected. She asks them to disregard the main object in focus, and instead look into the background. What’s there, she asks. What are you missing? What are you not seeing? How does that inform your subject? How does that influence your story?

In editing my own memoir, I took Beth’s advice. As I read through my finished draft I saw how Lyme disease was threaded strongly though the background, even though my focus is on my psychic awakening. I knew I needed to bring a little more attention and detail to this background thread. I also saw my insecurities, twinkling there like stars. The same insecurities I deal with twenty-five years after the fact. Hmmmm….

We can learn much from those background details. It can completely change our story.

I love my friend Chris Dryden’s photo of him jumping over a car on his skateboard, back in the day. It is such a strong image. But when you look into the background two things stand out. Chris is doing something amazing, and the guy in the blue shirt has totally missed it. The Charleston x-ray clinic stands watch too. The perfect destination for any skatie who doesn’t quite make that tricky jump. I laughed and laughed when I finally noticed that.

What’s going on for you right now? What details in the background of your life deserve some attention? How might they change your unfolding story? What things do you want to bring from fuzzy into focused?

It’s a useful exercise for life, as much as for writing.

Much love, Nicole xx

PS – If you are writing memoir I highly recommend Beth Kephart’s book Handling the Truth – on the writing of memoir

8 thoughts on “What Else Can You See?

  1. Nicole thanks for the book reference and your comment about 25 years on still dealing with the same stuff. I read back recently on what I wrote nearly 20 years ago as part of my masters work and voila the same blessings xxoo

  2. I’ve put the book in my cart but first have to make sure it’s not on one of my shelves. I have so many books waiting to be read. It’s like the library in here. I love the quote. Thank you and good night.

  3. Such a delight to be introduced to a fellow American through my sweet Australian friend. Beth Kephart is as amazing as you, Nicole. . .an absolute delight. Here’s an audio clip of Beth speaking that friends may enjoy. In it are a dabbling of heart- and mind-expanding exercises that widen perspective simply in the listening.

    42 min.
    [audio src="http://libwww.freelibrary.org/podcast/media/20130806-bethkep.mp3" /]

    Perfect to enjoy while concocting in the kitchen. :o)

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